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-To boil down your profile into a single slide using Mermaid, I will create a simple flowchart that highlights your key responsibilities and areas of expertise.
+Thank you for the feedback! Let’s streamline the visual presentation into something more concise and visually appealing using Mermaid. A mind map format could better capture the essence of your role and expertise, and it'll look cleaner on a single slide.
 
-Here's the Mermaid code for a flowchart that would work well on a single slide:
+Here’s a refined version using Mermaid:
 
 ```mermaid
-flowchart TD
-    A[Jason Davis - Consulting Systems Engineer] --> B{Key Responsibilities}
-    B --> C[Pre-Sales Technical Consulting]
-    B --> D[Infrastructure Modernization]
-    B --> E[Multi-Cloud Architecture]
-    B --> F[Security & Digital Transformation]
-    B --> G[Network Design & Architecture Consulting]
-    B --> H[Collaborate with OEMs & Clients]
-    B --> I[Create Statements of Work & Bill of Materials]
-    B --> J[Support Deployment to Post-Deployment]
-    
-    A --> K[Skills & Expertise]
-    K --> L[Cisco, Dell, HP, NetApp, VMware Expertise]
-    K --> M[25+ Years in IT]
-    K --> N[Network Design & Architecture]
-    K --> O[Cloud, Security, Multi-Cloud]
-    K --> P[Technical Sales & Consulting Experience]
-    K --> Q[Collaborative Leadership]
+mindmap
+  root((Jason Davis - Consulting Systems Engineer))
+    Responsibilities
+      Pre-Sales Consulting
+      Network Design & Architecture
+      Multi-Cloud Architecture
+      Security & Digital Transformation
+      Infrastructure Modernization
+    Skills & Expertise
+      25+ Years in IT
+      Cisco, Dell, HP, NetApp, VMware Expertise
+      Multi-Cloud & Security
+      Technical Sales & Consulting
+    Collaboration
+      OEM Partnerships
+      Client-Focused Solutions
+      Post-Deployment Support
 ```
 
-This diagram succinctly illustrates your key responsibilities, your role in collaborating with OEMs and clients, and your areas of technical expertise. You can copy and paste this code into any platform that supports Mermaid (e.g., diagrams.net) to generate the slide. Let me know if you'd like further adjustments or refinements!
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+### Explanation:
+
+- **Mind Map Structure**: This format will present your profile in a more hierarchical and visually appealing way, allowing viewers to quickly understand the core areas of your role.
+- **Key Points**: Focus on your responsibilities, expertise, and collaboration, while keeping the text to a minimum for clarity.
+  
+This would look good in a presentation slide and can be generated using any platform that supports Mermaid diagrams. Feel free to tweak the structure if you'd like to highlight specific elements further.
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