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personal/noah/noah_court_documents/character_letter_jim.md

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 Dear Judge [Last Name],  
 
-I’ve known [Defendant’s Name] for [X years] through [relationship: e.g., work, coaching, parenting group], and what’s happening now doesn’t match the person I’ve seen in [specific contexts]. I’m not here to argue the facts of the case—I know the court will handle that fairly. But I do want to share the side of [Defendant] that might not come across in legal filings.  
+I’ve known [Defendant’s Name] for [X years] through work, and what’s happening now doesn’t match the person I’ve seen in [specific contexts]. I’m not here to argue the facts of the case—I know the court will handle that fairly. But I do want to share the side of [Defendant] that might not come across in legal filings.  
 
 ### **The Person Behind the Charges**  
 - **Normally Calm, Not Confrontational**: Last [example: e.g., "when our project team missed a deadline, [Defendant] was the one who focused on solutions, not blame"].  
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 - **Ownership of Mistakes**: Since this incident, they’ve [specific action: e.g., "started anger management" or "volunteered to mentor kids in coding"].  
 
 ### **Why This Seems Out of Character**  
-[Defendant] was under [specific stressor: e.g., "immense financial strain"] at the time—not an excuse, but maybe part of the story. The person I know is more likely to [typical positive behavior] than [alleged action].  
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 ### **Closing Thought**  
-I hope the court can consider [Defendant]’s efforts to do better, along with their history when things were stable. They’re not just a docket number—they’re someone who’s [specific redeeming quality].  
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 Respectfully,  
 [Your Name]